Okay, so this had been sitting around for quite a while now. I think it had been a year since then? In any case, I thought it wasn't really all that cool so I didn't post it up. XP
Anyways, I hope you like it! And I hope it's fine. :')
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This was a scene from my fic "Memories and Moments", to those who can recognise it. Let's say it was my portrayal, and it was inspired by a certain video game. *ahem*
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Dusk by me Dark Link, The Legend of Zelda by Nintendo
Great job on this! I remember this from your fanfiction... Heheh.
Vision: I like how you added the shines and gave the entire ball of people a bit of 3D feel. It gives it a bit of a "impending" feel. Great!
Originality: This is your own idea, own twist on the story--I like it!
Technique: I suspect that this is done in pencil? Anyways, there's nothing special in this, but it's quite well done if it's a pencil, and even better if it's in charcoal!
Impact: This... Is a pressing matter. I think the focus was meant to be on Dark Link--is that right? If not, I have to say I was confused on whether or not the focus of the drawing itself was on Dark or the league of Dark Links up there.
But hey, all in all, GREAT JOB! (caps lock activated *boop*) Yay! Keep up the great job!
I have to commend you on this one. I wouldn't have been able to draw that many bodies in the same picture and stay sane. As always, your proportions and poses are perfect and the expression of the one in the front is really representative of the whole situation (both in the image itself and the fanfiction it goes with). The shading is great and this just looks downright awesome for a graphite drawing.
Seeing this really brought that one scene from Memories and Moments alive in my head and let me see what exactly you had in mind when you thought of the scene.
I have no complaints. You get a perfect score from me!
Vision: I like how you added the shines and gave the entire ball of people a bit of 3D feel. It gives it a bit of a "impending" feel. Great!
Originality: This is your own idea, own twist on the story--I like it!
Technique: I suspect that this is done in pencil? Anyways, there's nothing special in this, but it's quite well done if it's a pencil, and even better if it's in charcoal!
Impact: This... Is a pressing matter. I think the focus was meant to be on Dark Link--is that right? If not, I have to say I was confused on whether or not the focus of the drawing itself was on Dark or the league of Dark Links up there.
But hey, all in all, GREAT JOB! (caps lock activated *boop*) Yay! Keep up the great job!
I have to commend you on this one. I wouldn't have been able to draw that many bodies in the same picture and stay sane. As always, your proportions and poses are perfect and the expression of the one in the front is really representative of the whole situation (both in the image itself and the fanfiction it goes with). The shading is great and this just looks downright awesome for a graphite drawing.
Seeing this really brought that one scene from Memories and Moments alive in my head and let me see what exactly you had in mind when you thought of the scene.
I have no complaints. You get a perfect score from me!
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